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Wow...I love your style, so deep, it bleeds so eloquently, raw and awesome. I must admit, I had to look up a couple words in the dictionary.

posted by yellowrose55 on March 28, 2009 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

How many of us have asked that question? Very, very strong emotion here.

posted by mneme on March 26, 2009 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

Striving to understand the ever spinning advance of your being is the utmost challenge!

posted by merkie on March 25, 2009 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

Hey man great poem I like your style and passion

posted by chiloh on March 24, 2009 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

Only in the past few days I have seen your poems. I must say you have a way with words.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 24, 2009 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the line

TO say cheese in pastel colors!!!!

posted by riri0322 on March 24, 2009 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

Impressive words with deep meaning. Thank you.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on March 24, 2009 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

some deep words here

posted by Lanetay on March 24, 2009 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Intriguing piece my friend
very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on March 24, 2009 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

I want you to stay the course
I am...I am determined with iron will...

posted by mysteria on March 24, 2009 at 1:22 AM | link to this | reply


posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 23, 2009 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply


posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 23, 2009 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful workand thanks for sharing

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on March 23, 2009 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Profound questions ????????????

posted by afzal50 on March 23, 2009 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply