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Re: drohan
You are right about my misunderstanding what you had said. I went back and checked again what was written in pink. Still I would like to discuss this with you. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on February 6, 2009 at 2:22 PM
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Justi ..Thanks for reading ..you misunderstood what i wrote ..EVE was not mother of Jesus ..Mary is the one ..i meant EVE ..JESUS MOTHER AND NOAH'S WIFE WERE MENTIONED IN QURAAN 
posted by
drohan254
on February 5, 2009 at 11:00 PM
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Justi
I'm reading you on a PC. There is somebody else who has this extraneous stuff, though I can't remember at the moment who...
And as for this change in person thing: It's actually interesting if you switch occasionally. As I mentioned, Faulkner has done it, as have others, and it works well. For the most part, you leave the narrative in the third person, but especially if the hero or heroine (here Jess) is intensely reflecting on things, you can do a kind of stream-of-consciousness first person part...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 3, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Re: Corbin
Thanks so much. There has been some sort of Chinese or something mixed all through it. You mean it is out now? Thanks.
posted by
Justi
on February 3, 2009 at 5:31 PM
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Justi......
I'm sorry.....I didn't read the comments below.....it is reading just fine....I was making a joke about the Chinese......I had no Idea it was that kind of problem.....LOLOLOL
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on February 3, 2009 at 5:13 PM
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Thanks Corbin
Blogit is supposed to be repairing it. I appreciate your reading it is totally fine on my desktop and on Firefox browser.
posted by
Justi
on February 3, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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Re: Will someone tell me if they can read this yet?
There's something there....but it's in Chinese!!!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on February 3, 2009 at 5:06 PM
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Will someone tell me if they can read this yet?
posted by
Justi
on February 3, 2009 at 4:39 PM
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Kabu
I am so sorry this is happening. I don't know why. I have contacted Blogit and they have not responded yet. I am sure they will help if they can. Thank you for reading even if it is such a problem. Love to you both from both of us!
posted by
Justi
on February 1, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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the junk is a nuisance but the story is so great I just have to read on cos
you are awesomely good darling.
posted by
Kabu
on February 1, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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Re: Taps
As long as the muse will stay with me I will continue and that is a lot more to the final showdowns. Thank you for reading and commenting.
posted by
Justi
on February 1, 2009 at 4:46 PM
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scotcanada
Thanks for all the kind words. I don't know what has happened to my print. I am having Blogit check it out. Thanks
posted by
Justi
on February 1, 2009 at 4:45 PM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you so much. Are you being able to read it without junk in the type? Many can't.
posted by
Justi
on February 1, 2009 at 4:44 PM
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What a fascinating tale. I will be following it to the end. I hope that is a long way off.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 1, 2009 at 3:52 PM
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Thank you for your kind commnt on that silly piece of mine.
I enjoyed reading your larest post, and offer my condolences on what sounds loke a tough, tough life. But somehow you have an attitude that makes me think you'll survive it all intact and even triumph in the end. I hope so, anyway.
What is all that extra stuff around your text?
posted by
scotcanada
on February 1, 2009 at 11:35 AM
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I am with you! It feels so real! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2009 at 2:45 AM
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NatureSpirit23.
Hi thank you for telling me this. I have just e mailed Blogit for help. Hopefully they can clear it up for me. I loved your line about mud and the gold nugget, thanks. Guess all went well today. Papa is ill, I will call you. ILU
posted by
Justi
on January 31, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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WileyJohn
Thank you for all your kind words. You are published. Do you think this is a viable story for publication?
posted by
Justi
on January 31, 2009 at 11:19 PM
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J, I see that stuff too, and I have a desktop.
I wish I knew what to tell you about how to get rid of it. Try Googling it; you may have hit a key that caused that stuff to show. That happened with me once. It's not showing on your screen though? Odd. It is distracting and annoying. It's like mud clinging to the gold nugget, so that you can't see the shine very well. Exhausted from the day's/week's activities & will call you soon. ILY. I did enjoy the family tension in this scene. No, I didn't, but you did it well enough that it made me sad and uncomfortable, so it was effective, is what I meant to say. G'night.
posted by
NatureSpirit23
on January 31, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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Justi
Arley sure wasn't a nice person at all. You describe the entire situation beautifully, and one could cry at the thought of a young mother and her 2 children being left out in the cold by her parents after divorce. Great writing and love to you and George.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 31, 2009 at 1:34 PM
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Nautikos
I am trying to see whether it reads better in first person or third? What do you think?
posted by
Justi
on January 31, 2009 at 10:26 AM
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Nautikos
Are you getting that junk on a desk top or a laptop? I don't see it on my desktop but I do on the laptop. I don't know what it is.
posted by
Justi
on January 31, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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Mind you...
It
would be nice it you could get rid of this <!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]--> stuff...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 31, 2009 at 7:38 AM
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Justi
This story continues to fascinate me. About that change in person: it's allowed! I actually find it interesting. Many authors have done it -Faulkner comes to mind. You might want to use a cursive font though...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 31, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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adnohr
Thank you for reading. I believe many women are very strong in different ways than men. I appreciate your kind words.
posted by
Justi
on January 31, 2009 at 6:16 AM
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Have just read your last two chapters, Justi.
Captivating story. And Kudos to Jess for holding up against everything wrong in her life. A strong female character you have created!
posted by
adnohr
on January 31, 2009 at 5:07 AM
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