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Re: TAPS
I do appreciate your reading and your comments. They are encouraging to me.
posted by
Justi
on February 1, 2009 at 4:43 PM
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I'm still keeping up. I read this the day you posted it and then got sidetracked when I was about to comment. That happens to me, LOL.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 1, 2009 at 3:45 PM
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NatureSpirit23
Hi sweetie, thank you so much. I am still having trouble with person. I think I have to go back to 1st person. In that it almost writes itself. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. ILU
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 11:25 PM
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Like everyone else. . .
I can't wait to read what happens next, especially in the showdown between Jess and her mother. Excellent family conflict there.
posted by
NatureSpirit23
on January 30, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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Kabu
Sometimes I wonder if they are not supposed to be but it is really difficult. Pain between a mother and children is so so hard. You know what I am talking about but it is from the different side.
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Wiley John
No I don't they don't show up on my desk top, just on the laptop. I didn't know everybody was getting that. Thanks for telling me.
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 9:00 PM
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Nautikos
I appreciate your comment. That is what I want it to do. I have not edited, just a proof read.
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 8:58 PM
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how difficult family realtionships can be and you have conveyed them so
well here between the mother and the daughter. I heard myself mumbling "old Bat'" LOL.
posted by
Kabu
on January 30, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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Justi
Well done, you sure do convey the emotions well too. Do you know what these are caused by in your post luv? <!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]--> It makes the post difficult to read and maybe somebody can provide an answer for you. Love to you both.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 30, 2009 at 8:20 PM
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Justi
Very well done! I actually felt the emotional tension during that encounter between mother and daughter...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 30, 2009 at 5:11 PM
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Re: lustorlove
Thank you for the read. I am glad you enjoyed it.
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 2:34 PM
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I hadnt seen this before but its good
posted by
Lanetay
on January 30, 2009 at 10:00 AM
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Sam444
Thank you so much.
posted by
Justi
on January 30, 2009 at 7:01 AM
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This is so good!! I am captivated! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 30, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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