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Re: TAPS
You humble me. This is such an encouragement. Thank you so very much.
posted by
Justi
on January 21, 2009 at 8:29 AM
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A sad, horrible story, but so well written that one is compelled to follow it to the end. I give it five stars out of five.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 21, 2009 at 1:13 AM
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Re: Nautikos
I am amazed that I can write stories that people are looking for the next chapter. Thank you so very much. It will be here tomorrow.
posted by
Justi
on January 20, 2009 at 4:41 PM
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Justi
Whew! That was some scene! For a while there it seemed to be on a knife's edge whether she would shoot or not, which of course was the point! Very well done! I'm looking forward to the next chapter...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 20, 2009 at 2:08 PM
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Wiley
Truth is I have lived a long time and have seen that rich or poor, educated nor not, saint or sinner to some degree all life is familiar in relationship more than people want to believe. If I can make you believe it was me or if I can make you think I know too much about you I have written the novel about most people and it will be read. I hope I can do that. Be blessed. You are so encouraging.
posted by
Justi
on January 20, 2009 at 12:52 PM
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Justi
That was written as if you lived it yourself, it was that well written a story. I'll be looking forward to the rest that comes. You have really been gifted luv and God Bless you.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 19, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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Kabu
You are one to talk. Your work is magical. I love reading it. One of the things I love so much is the information you give us on Australia, we can see it. I am so thankful for your comments.
posted by
Justi
on January 19, 2009 at 9:35 PM
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NatureSpirit 23
Thank you so much for reading these. All that will be revealed in the course of events as they play out. ILY
posted by
Justi
on January 19, 2009 at 9:33 PM
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I missed chapter 5 but it was good to read 5&6 together.
I raced through it my heart beating like a drum it's such an amazing piece of work. Looking forward to what happened next.
posted by
Kabu
on January 19, 2009 at 8:25 PM
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I enjoyed reading this.
It was shocking that he asked about had she wrecked, as if he hadn't done anything. Was he truly sick in the head? In the future, I'd like to see how the children react to his being gone. The boys who witnessed the beating versus the girl who didn't--or had they all seen it before? Your writing is engaging. ILY
posted by
NatureSpirit23
on January 19, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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