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Thanks! I'll have this updated momentarily. "Dreams are mine to carry me..." Nice. We can do anything in our dreams.

posted by BetsyLewis on January 20, 2009 at 3:09 AM | link to this | reply

At last I see that I am free

Dreams are mine to carry me

Away into another flight

I whisper my secrets of delight.

Alone I think of thee.

posted by merkie on January 19, 2009 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

I think the format is unusual unless it is two poems but this works well.

posted by mneme on January 19, 2009 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply