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posted by
Itza
on January 21, 2009 at 10:55 AM
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wow! wow! wow!!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on January 17, 2009 at 7:23 AM
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Poignant question and vivid answer as well! Great imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 16, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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Very sensitive words
I love it!
posted by
zuraffo
on January 16, 2009 at 5:54 AM
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Beautifully expressed; the last verse reminds me of "if you love something, set it free....." Thanks for stopping by; yes, the basic celebrations of the harvest festival are similar all over India. Have a great day! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 16, 2009 at 3:37 AM
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A person who only takes and never gives is being shortchanged on the best part of life.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 16, 2009 at 1:45 AM
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Straightforward ~.~
Very nice! Many people end up on the short end of a give and take situation. Noble of you to be concerned about the other person. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 15, 2009 at 5:11 AM
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Nicely done indeed
open and honest; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 15, 2009 at 3:25 AM
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I like the realness of this poem, the rawness of loving someone and yet having a hard time being with them. You expressed it well, kudos.
posted by
calia14
on January 14, 2009 at 11:28 PM
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