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Gorgeous!
You've so written my predicament right now. It's sad to have to love and let go, at the same time!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 15, 2009 at 4:49 AM
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beautiful, deep, and romantic...wish you happiness and love
posted by
fairygoddess
on January 13, 2009 at 6:49 PM
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It's a very difficult position, but I completely understand wanting
someone's happiness before your own.
Anything that is meant to be will find a way to thrive.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 11, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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Realistic, sensible, and practical.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 11, 2009 at 3:59 PM
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Wow simply beautiful
described how I feel right now perfectly.
I would like to share this though: No love is ever in vain... because it is the most powerful force in the universe. If it is felt in your heart, it is felt in the other's heart as well. It is just that you accept it more readily...
posted by
zuraffo
on January 7, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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There's a lot of pushing and pulling in this romantic cry....
I like it a lot.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 7, 2009 at 3:36 PM
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Very sincerely, in love. . .
I used to sing a song - I think - of Sue Thompson which says: "goodbye, I hate to see you go but have a good time.." You said it really straight forward. I like to think that People can be prisoners of love, but not love as prison for anyone. I love this
posted by
Rotsen
on January 6, 2009 at 4:18 AM
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Amazing and deeply heartfelt!
Wonderfully scripted. And I agree, gives one much to ponder!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 3, 2009 at 1:30 PM
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This is great, Straightforward.
It gives a person a lot to think about.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 2, 2009 at 2:45 AM
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brave poem! Happy New Year!
posted by
Ariala
on January 1, 2009 at 6:50 AM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on January 1, 2009 at 6:10 AM
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Interesting to and fro argumentative thrusts! Happy New Year!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 31, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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HAPPY NEW YEARS
posted by
Samantha39
on December 31, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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Deep and poignant expressions!
posted by
Katray2
on December 31, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Straightforward ~.~
Great write -- deeply moving...with a sense of honesty and awareness.Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 31, 2008 at 7:07 AM
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Excellent realization and understanding! I can't help but things break ups would be much easier with an adopted attitude that is so aptly portrayed in this poem! Kudos! Happy New Year! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 31, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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We call that loving you for me........
Beautifully done my friend; many thanks and a very blessed and happy New Year to you
posted by
mariaki
on December 31, 2008 at 2:45 AM
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Happy New Year and here's to lots more poetry.
posted by
Kabu
on December 30, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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Awsome write your are a lease trueful. Deep insight with deep long roots.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 30, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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