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Everyone of these is very good but I still like the first the most! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 25, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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You just have the words that touch the heartStir the soul and test the mind
posted by
Mystereo
on December 25, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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Like how this was written as if in little chapters. These headings work for me because I don't have to read a lot to get someplace. Reminds me how Jane Austin once responded to an inquiry from an aspiring novelist, who asked what she should do after she sent her character on a trip. Austin replied that if you didn't go with her/him, don't write about it. Just write what you know.
posted by
jfm32
on December 23, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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Wonderfull merkie! Each of them. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 23, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Well done
Exquisite imagery throughout the selection. I greatly admire your mastery of a form which consistently eludes me
posted by
lionreign
on December 23, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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Your sky is wonderful my friend!
the imagery is so vivid here; a truly superb piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 23, 2008 at 3:37 AM
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This is nice.
I too, enjoyed this poem. This is the second time I've read it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 23, 2008 at 2:41 AM
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Hey I enjoy this poem!
Simplicity is beautiful
posted by
zuraffo
on December 23, 2008 at 2:11 AM
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the prettiest sky i have seen.wonderful work.i like the style very much. thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 22, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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Merkie
Keep reaching for the stars luv, this was terrific.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 22, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Merkie these are just tremendous! I love them. I am taking anther read for myself on my way out! The first Haiku just gabbed me and would not let go! Am I lucky or what!? sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 22, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Enjoyable poem
Thank you for sharing it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 22, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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A beautiful journey with your Haiku's, sending out happy reflections of life.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 22, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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Very nice work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 22, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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I LOVE it...good poem for my little grandaughter who can stop
all pain with one little smile...xxxxoooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 22, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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well now these are just wonderful.. I think I'll go read them again!
~peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 22, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Awesome collection, Merkie!
I love pink too..:) 
posted by
Katray2
on December 22, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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