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You are an artist in verse marta drawing the emotional picture in a velvet chalk that mists the eyes and leves an impint on a heart! Encore !
posted by
merkie
on December 18, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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wooh this is good. Love the way you draw us in and move us with your words
posted by
Smittenheimer
on December 18, 2008 at 6:41 PM
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An excellent and lovely poem ...
... with bells of past as the sound of love that still lives - great written - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 18, 2008 at 11:06 AM
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Oh get off the page...your making me cry...
posted by
LemonyEmz
on December 18, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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Such a heartfelt albeit sad piece my dear Sinome!
you painted the whole picture so clearly with your beautiful words my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 18, 2008 at 6:01 AM
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Indescribably beautiful and touching; straight from the heart. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 18, 2008 at 3:18 AM
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Poignant and nostalgic !
posted by
afzal50
on December 18, 2008 at 3:11 AM
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It makes me wonder how love, how such feeling, how loving memories can be so one-sided. It makes me wonder if he has those feelings too, for you, and the man of my memories for me.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 17, 2008 at 11:51 PM
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Oh, my princess, what a poem! So evocative of the feelings, so much pathos, and therefore, so very touching the heart that it leaves one dazzled and dizzy; yet so cathartic. You're gifted when touchiing our feelings. Exquisite, awesome, phenomenal!!!
to you from my cold desert sands. BTW, I made a full post from your query.
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Bhaskar.ing/585262
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 17, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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Your writing is superb. Holding me there... on the edge of my seat. There's so much sadness in this poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 17, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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I sometimes think that Christmas can be a very emotionally draining time of
the year.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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Outstanding imagery and words that just hold your heart in their hands...
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 17, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Awsome! Your deepness makes me want to reach out a hug of warmth.
Reading your work is a pleasure so many writer I read them all, all I can, you satnd out!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 17, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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Of course you can fly!! I bought a painting last year from a cuban painter called JF Beltran. It's called sueno con volar. I'll take a picture and send you. Your comment on how I should treta my new 'puter was a riot. I love the spitting bit!! Just practiced and hit it in the eye!! Hasta pronto querida.
posted by
vogue
on December 17, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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wow, such detail, excellent work
posted by
Samantha39
on December 17, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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really beautiful.poem
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 17, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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My goodness this is an awesome poem! I couldn't stop reading it! The imagery captured me so! I read it four times darlin! I love this line:
until a falling snowflake reminds me of you, And there you go developing it from there! Wow O wow! sammy xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2008 at 6:18 PM
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But fly we must
I came as an angel; my pupose to spread love. But having carried burdens that love would have erased; my angels ings had broken beneanth the heavy weight. Love can conquer any pain and mend the worst of breaks. The more I love, the lighter the load and with my wings I fly..... This path that we travel a lonely one indeed and wish we were somewhere else but to this we have agreed and angels follow us in all our steps. skye
posted by
skye08
on December 17, 2008 at 6:12 PM
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Very expressive and rich in images. Beautiful. Keep flying and God bless.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 17, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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SUCH BEAUTIFUL , SAD WORDS, YOU EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS SO WELL, I REMEMBER HAVING THESE FEELINGS LONG AGO, IF I REMEMBER RIGHT, WRITING ABOUT THEM SOMEHOW DID EASE THE PAIN, I WISH FOR YOU THE BEST, I CAN TELL BY YOUR WORDS THAT YOU HAVE A KIND HEART, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 17, 2008 at 4:07 PM
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A sad dance it is.
Futility in the grip of loss.
posted by
metalrat
on December 17, 2008 at 3:15 PM
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