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very nice
posted by
mejustme
on August 25, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Well done!
I remember living that exact scene.
Reminds me of a movie, restaurant, couple in love at a table watching a couple at the next table eating in silence. She asks what kind of people sit at the table and don't talk to each other. He says married people. Your lines are perfect...
posted by
Pat_B
on July 24, 2008 at 5:33 AM
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what a perfect analogy.... this rocks.
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 23, 2008 at 5:55 PM
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No one is watching, might as well be alone. Stirring and true. Love this poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 23, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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Azur, I imagine it was... I'm not quite sure when. Thinking of doing a verse-novel one day.
posted by
mneme
on July 23, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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Mneme
The off switch was found a little later?
posted by
Azur
on July 23, 2008 at 5:23 PM
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