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Ciel, thank you
hope you didn't have to scroll this time......
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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aha-310
Thank you.
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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The rhythm of the poem is the rhythm of the sea...
Nicely done!
posted by
Ciel
on July 15, 2008 at 1:47 PM
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What beautiful writing - you really create atmosphere through your poem...it makes me want to visit the ocean. I loved reading your poem.
aha_310
posted by
aha_310
on July 15, 2008 at 1:21 PM
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Afzal, thanks......
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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Justi, your response is just as good as a poem...rather powerful
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:32 AM
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NiteTide, you were at the ocean with me!!!!!!!
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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Troosha, thank you. I am glad you liked the poem.
It was so off the top of my head, you won't believe it.........
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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Samamtha39, have a great trip and write a post too, yes?
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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elysianfields, thank you
I too love the picture. I am not sure where I took it but that doesn't matter does it?
posted by
Greenfields
on July 15, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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It's simply beautiful and inspiring .
posted by
afzal50
on July 15, 2008 at 4:51 AM
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Greenfields
Such a beautiful poem. Glowing portrait of one being the ocean such a vastness, such power, such nimble movement, like a symphony knowing her storms bring all the brass the orchestra can possibly find. This is a really a wonderful poem.
posted by
Justi
on July 15, 2008 at 2:45 AM
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Wow....I felt like I was the ocean with you. This was wonderful!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 14, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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Greenfields
Oh, how I'd love to be sitting in that chair watching the ocean and listening to its rhythmic song. Your ending to this piece is superb!
posted by
Troosha
on July 14, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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I get to see the ocean in a week.....
posted by
Samantha39
on July 14, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Greenfields, I feel the buoyancy... the flow of this piece is remarkable. Beautiful poetry ~ and the photo draws me in, to peace ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 14, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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