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An imotional rollercoster ending sadly
posted by
Daf_10
on July 11, 2008 at 2:49 PM
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...love the use of water, the heart...storms...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 11, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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Purple_Mermaid, I think sometimes people learn that lesson at terrible cost.
May I ask a stupid question? What is the purpose of posting a second time the name of a post/poem the day after the poem has been posted? I notice several bloggers doing it.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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drenched with love
This wet piece makes us yearn to willingly submerge beneath your flowing waters dear Lady.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 11, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Nice poetry dear purple mermaid.
posted by
auslander
on July 11, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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So very beautifully done and that pic was simply marvelous to go with the feelings. My Manilian Mermaid today looks so beautiful with that crown as her title.
to you all
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 11, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Beautifully written my dear Jen............
perhaps I should seriously consider getting myself one of these vests; I have a feeling a personal storm is brewing for me; thank you for this timely verse my friend; take care of you and have a blessed weekend
posted by
mariaki
on July 11, 2008 at 4:35 AM
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Amazingly written Jen...Great job!
posted by
Sinome
on July 10, 2008 at 10:24 PM
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That's the way it feels - Again, you have voiced it perfectly.
posted by
ChristianHorrorWriter
on July 10, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 10, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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Yes, I agree, shows a great deal of wisdom --- profound! and rich - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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Your statement is so wise .
posted by
afzal50
on July 10, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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I feel your emotion down, and your words float love! Excellent! Lol, BCA! +
posted by
BC-A
on July 10, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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lovely...
the sadness was written with beauty and I loved the picture that accompanied it.
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 10, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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Jen,
So sad, yet lovely. You write so beautiful, and create such vivid pictures, dear friend!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 10, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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PM, in case you don't drop by my blog again, please drop by once more to do just a minor edit of your lovely haiku! Thanks
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 6:27 PM
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...the ending was just surprising for me!!! This was lovely, PM, just beautifully lovely!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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Such intensity!
I was captivated
posted by
Kobriel
on July 10, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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again, wow!
"hostile domicile." i like that.
its a sad poem
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 10, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Luckily
we carry that life vest at all times
posted by
Azur
on July 10, 2008 at 5:11 PM
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