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dark_mistress ~.~
Thanks so much. I appreciate your comment and your visit. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:58 AM
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Yes, Chris ~.~
...an awfully long time. Thanks! Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:57 AM
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Thanks, Maria ~. ~
I appreciate your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:55 AM
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Moon ~.~
Yes -- betrayal in love is devastating...and so very hard to deal with. Thanks for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:54 AM
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NiteTide ~.~
Thanks for sharing that "feeling." Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:53 AM
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Casper ~.~
Unfortunately, too many "loving" hearts experience this betrayal. Thanks for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 10, 2008 at 2:51 AM
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The second verse caught me...
well written.
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 9, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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I too-know of 'betrayal' soul speaker.You have written this extremely well!
It hurts--for a very long time! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 9, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Unfortunately love can be very fickle my friend........
beautifully captured in this excellent poem; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 9, 2008 at 5:27 AM
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...devastating...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 10:02 PM
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I felt a chill go down my spine at your final line. This poem was just drenched in sorrow and loss...and I was must amazed at how much I felt in this poem. wow...
posted by
NiteTide
on July 8, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Ouch!!
It sounded so promising, at first. Sounds like most of my relationships
posted by
caspertoo
on July 8, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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