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Now I know to reign-in the metaphors...
...when describing genitalia of either sex, if I ever choose to go that route.
It seems the more that writers try to find original metaphors for genitalia, the cheesier it sounds.

posted by metalrat on June 30, 2008 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Jesus, this stuff is hilarious. I've been reading bad metaphors by
high schoolers in creative writing classes, but this crap is from adults?  And published authors?  Oh, man, this is priceless...

posted by saul_relative on June 30, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

I would love to read more bad sex in fiction...
put some more awful examples up its sooo entertaining...you really made me giggle this morning with these. Or maybe its just my English sense of humor. Off to read more of your stuff now. Holly.x

posted by HollyBird on June 30, 2008 at 2:03 AM | link to this | reply

LOL!
Okay, now I'm off to read vogue's post!

posted by KaBooM62 on June 30, 2008 at 2:00 AM | link to this | reply

Don't get me started nautıkos. I do have such a dırty mind!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Today's post ıs partıcularly for you.

posted by vogue on June 29, 2008 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

hahhahhaa... the evil one versus the hound ... sounds like a good story.

posted by -blackcat on June 29, 2008 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

LOLOLOL.. too funny~Peace, OTA

posted by Blue_feathers on June 29, 2008 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

LOL Naut!
I can already tell, I'm going to be giggling about this one all day!

posted by Sira890 on June 29, 2008 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Oh my...
Where to start? So many images come erecting into one's mind, I am salivating just at the idea of laying them down, and feel a hot pulsion to share the moment... with you dear.LOL

posted by auslander on June 29, 2008 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

Too funny, Naut...
You've totally disproved the old adage "bad sex is better than no sex at all."  I do like the twisted "inconvenient coitus" title, though... 

posted by Pat_B on June 29, 2008 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

It is almost too inviting. My mind is turning and turning! Good morning Naut! I hope you have a wonderful day!   Shelly

posted by sam444 on June 29, 2008 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

Naut,
I liked Feschuck's offering - but to my mind you can't have worse than D H Lawrence (Mellors the gamekeeper). Just recently I've had to read again Kate Millett's take on that, very amusing. Not that it was meant to be, I suspect:)


posted by mneme on June 29, 2008 at 2:02 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos
I suppose we can expect a forward by Al Gore.... Such a waste of ink! :)

posted by Justi on June 28, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply