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Imagery Par excellence! Great to have you back...
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 11, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Write from your soul poet! mom
posted by sam444 on June 11, 2008 at 12:25 PM | | reply |
Great words
and a beautiful image.
posted by malcolm on June 11, 2008 at 9:37 AM | | reply |
purple
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 11, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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Tenderly touching, with a whisper, a hint of yearning . . .
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 11, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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Your poems are so emotional. You are so talented.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on June 11, 2008 at 3:14 PM
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The ending of this poem was just perfect. It was clear and beautiful!! I know you don't write "happy" things, but you do an excellent job of blending happiness, peace, and a sense of sadness into this poem.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 11, 2008 at 2:04 PM
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Hı there! Fınally I have been able to read you agaın. From my ınternet connectıon at home I Just couldn't connect to your posts but from the ınternet cafe ıt works. Just wanted to let you know that I have not forgotten you my dear.
posted by
vogue
on June 11, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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Purple
Sometimes when we write about peaceful moments or happier thoughts the process itself can make us feel more positive. I especially liked these lines:
Dancing in soothing pantomime
Interpreting calm in swarming rhyme
posted by
Troosha
on June 11, 2008 at 7:25 AM
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Jen my dear heart...........
this is so beautiful; I'm sure you will be more comfortable with "happy" soon; slowly but surely your healing process has to get you there; stay well my friend - slow and sure is the way to go; take care of you and God bless always
posted by
mariaki
on June 11, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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Very beautiful
As usual.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 11, 2008 at 12:18 AM
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wow this is sooooooo much fun to read
i hope you are doing better and find some good times...mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 10, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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Purple_Mermaid, what a beautiful post to read, and to listen to, in the middle of the night, when one cannot sleep.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 10, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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Re: Sinome my never failing friend.....
i know exactly what you mean my love, to be honest with you, your opinion shares that of my doctor's....i was advice so many times to stay away for a while from writing heavy stuff which is one of the many reason why my health is failing...but i'm just one stubborn mermaid forbidden to swim...it's just utterly impossible for me to behave accordingly...
and your constant reminder for me to loosen up help me a lot my love...you are so dear to me...your emails while i was down made me feel strong in so many ways...thank you so very much....my love to you always; Jen
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 10, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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Re: Can I applaud ~ may I give you the poet's laureate award? Elyse.....
my beloved elyse, you humble me so...you among many others like troosha, sinome, sam444, vickip et al...so many of your great poetess deserve this award more than i do my love...thank you so much for such a flattering comment, it inspires me so....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 10, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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YES!!! that would certainly do my beautiful Mermaid... Please know that I only said I wanted you to write happy poems because I want your heart to heal...to smile...to be happy so that you are also smiling and happy, cuz I love you so much it hurts when you are sad... Be well my amazing poetess... and thank you so much... Take care of you
posted by
Sinome
on June 10, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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Can I applaud ~ may I give you the poet's laureate award? This is so very well written, beautiful ---- inspiring ~ WOW!!!~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 10, 2008 at 6:09 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 10, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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Re: Darling my beloved sweetie you've had it rough too I know--Kabu dear...
how i admire the love you have for each other...and wiley's dedication to you is so inspiring, so as yours to him. Makes me wish to grow old and gray with the man i love and still express so much love for each other...nowadays love like that is very rare. You both are a gift to each other and to most of us. My love to you both.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 10, 2008 at 5:30 PM
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Darling my beloved sweetie you've had it rough too I know
Wiley will get better, I know he is , he has to be alright. We just live for each precious day. Thank you for vcaring dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on June 10, 2008 at 5:24 PM
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pretty poem ...
Rest on happiness in any form, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 10, 2008 at 4:36 PM
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