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Well done. Makes you want to do something to make a difference.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 5, 2008 at 5:28 AM
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Although touched with melancholy Kayzz
it's beauty excels; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on June 5, 2008 at 2:14 AM
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Very touching and filled with pathos, yet beautiful in content and style.
posted by
aryaindia
on June 5, 2008 at 12:38 AM
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Sad but I really like it
posted by
dark_mistress
on June 4, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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It's sad when such vitality...
...is suppressed, for whatever reason. Lovely verses.
posted by
metalrat
on June 4, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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...i think that you are right...i think that people are born with that depression/sorrow....artfully crafted....nice images....moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on June 4, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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Poignant and somewhat mysterious imagery! Well done though! shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 4, 2008 at 2:54 PM
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awww kinda sad:(
i think i know what your saying.. it sounds like a friend or a lover.. either way i have been depressed sad most of my life but it takes God to pull someone out of dispair.. well good write..mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 4, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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Cleverly written, very nice. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on June 4, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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