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Thank you..I enjoyed this.
posted by
Theresa_Poetry
on May 9, 2008 at 8:51 AM
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i am celebrating Nature too, Kola Neil says SHALOM
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 9, 2008 at 1:13 AM
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A HUGE THANK YOU!
To all that have commented...I am ever so happy that you all are enjoying my work..I find that your words inspire me to try new styles and to dig deep down and show you what I see and feel from time to time..Again Thank you all so much! I apologize for not thanking each of you individually..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 9, 2008 at 1:07 AM
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Wolves have always appealed to me. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 8, 2008 at 2:03 PM
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Marion dear, your writings always take us thru such vivid..
imagery we wouldn't normally imagine..u have a world of your own..and I'm soo glad you are sharing that with the rest of us..I'm blessed to be among one of your good friends..hope I can share in some of those adventures sometime..take care..Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 8, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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Wow, amazing poem. I especially liked the lines "The warmth of his / breath glows white / as it escapes his mouth, / against the silver shaded / light of the moon."
posted by
jmh256
on May 8, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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Wigopa
This part struck me the most – it created such a vivid image; his breath glows white as it escapes his mouth,against the silver shaded light of the moon.
posted by
Troosha
on May 8, 2008 at 7:50 AM
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Fantastic image. You are so creative and can really paint with words. Thanks a lot for your comment.
posted by
vogue
on May 8, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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absolutely wonderful wig ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 8, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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Excellent piece my dear
very powerful; I loved it; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 8, 2008 at 3:46 AM
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Here among the
wilderness we are
free to thrive as only
wild souls can be
Marion, this is so moving ~ makes me get chills --- Beautiful and powerful writing ~ (as always)
u and goodnight
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 7, 2008 at 11:08 PM
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awesome!
That was moving.
posted by
Toulong
on May 7, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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Very nice Poem!!!
posted by
Nataluna
on May 7, 2008 at 10:55 PM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 7, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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Great writing!
You deserve a star.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 7, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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great read
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 7, 2008 at 10:28 PM
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