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oh wow
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 5, 2008 at 2:53 AM
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romance and compassion in one magnetic piece!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 4, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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Oh this is so passionate...Afzal ~ you go --- write on!!!!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 4, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Very beauttiful poem from start to finish!
And thx for you gracious comment on my April 3rd entry "a poet".
posted by
Sudanym_
on April 4, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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Wow, that was hot :-)
posted by
Sinome
on April 4, 2008 at 4:24 PM
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posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 4, 2008 at 1:52 PM
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You are the romantic Afzal! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 4, 2008 at 1:40 PM
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Dude!!
posted by
jefco
on April 4, 2008 at 11:54 AM
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The passion of love!
Nicely spoken!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 4, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Afzal
Very sensual and loving, my sweet darling.
You are all that I dream of.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on April 4, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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