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Don't worry about it.
Soul_Builder is right.  Common themes often bring similar thoughts, and words.  There is little help for it other than not writing at all -- too terrible to consider.  If everything written had to be totally original with no similarity whatsoever to anything ever written by another most of our great literature would never have been written.

posted by notapoet on March 4, 2008 at 2:25 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks!
Thank you guys I wrote back to her too. I didn't realise that it was from her song, my man has just left for the army and I was feeling upset because my "best friend" turned on me and said he has probably run away from me. I hadn't heard her work before either untill this came up and I absulotly LOVE the song so, I guess it found me for a reason :)
Thanks for your comments I really appreciate them!

posted by Shanlizer88 on March 4, 2008 at 1:55 AM | link to this | reply

Yikes
Sorry that someone yelled at ya girl! They aren't identical but it is close!  I try to avoid anything that might be from somewhere at all costs for this reason.  Because people are rude! O and I wrote another poem for you boo!

posted by Resilience on March 3, 2008 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

Regardless of the issue someone might have, people REALLY need to learn how to give constructive feedback in a much nicer way!!!  There are much better ways to mention that the words may have come from somewhere else, etc....... I don't even know the song, but I like what you wrote.  Remember, what others think is irrelevant.  What matters is what you think of yourself!!! 

posted by majesticvisions on March 2, 2008 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

I carefully looked at yours and Alicia's. There is no complete match, so forget plagiarism. These words are used by people all the time.

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 28, 2008 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry about the previous comment.  sam

posted by sam444 on February 28, 2008 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

WTF PLAGERIST!!!!

you can at least mention alicia key's NAME SOMEWHERE!!!!!!!

( Alicia Keys)
oh... oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh...
oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh....

oh... oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh...
oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh....

oh... oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh...
oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh....

oh... oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh...
oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh....

I just want you close
Where you can stay forever
You can be sure
That it will only get better

You and me together
Through the days and nights
I don't worry 'cause
Everything's going to be alright
People keep talking they can say what they like
But all i know is everything's going to be alright

No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I'm feeling
No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I feel for you, you, you
Can get in the way of what I feel for you

(Junior Reid)
none of them can love me
like you do
your feelings for me
is not you
better love me
they cant come
between me and you
[No One lyrics on http://www.metrolyrics.com]

yes you always around
you're the one
to wear my crown
I know you love me
I know you'll never let me down
woman you are so blessed
you never worry or stress
[No One lyrics on

you're my empress
me and you together

(Alicia Keys)
When the rain is pouring down
And my heart is hurting
You will always be around
This I know for certain

You and me together
Through the days and nights
I don't worry 'cause
Everything's going to be alright
People keep talking they can say what they like
But all i know is everything's going to be alright

No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I'm feeling
No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I feel for you, you, you
Can get in the way of what I feel

I know some people search the world
To find something like what we have
I know people will try try to divide something so real
So till the end of time I'm telling you there is no one

No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I'm feeling
No one, no one, no one
Can get in the way of what I feel for you

oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

posted by JustJilly on February 28, 2008 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply