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ooooo This one reminds me of a poem I wrote I'll post it as my next one..
I think Mine is a bit longer though :D
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 17, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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Absolutely my friend
love overcomes all; well said; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on February 17, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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You nailed it!
Profound and beautifully written! Nice rhyming and flow. Good job!
posted by
metalrat
on February 17, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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Afzal...
written by one who does not wait for death to see and experience truth.
posted by
Transcendental_Child
on February 17, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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Afzal50,
You have captured a piece of the riddle. A lie is truth unrevealed! In death, we can only take the truth with us, for Our God to Judge! I fear our lies only harm or influence mankind!
posted by
Glennb
on February 17, 2008 at 10:09 AM
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Amen
written with a strong voice ~ Thank you
posted by
elysianfields
on February 17, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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As always precise and to the point poetry that drives home!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 17, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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Poignant and philosophical. Well done my friend. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 17, 2008 at 3:32 AM
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Well said.
posted by
white-cossack
on February 17, 2008 at 1:03 AM
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Afzal, Yes! One shall stand naked of all lies at the time of death
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 17, 2008 at 12:07 AM
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yap Afzal dear.......
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 16, 2008 at 10:12 PM
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Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 16, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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Great Job, My Friend!
You are everywhere!
Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head
posted by
CRShelley
on February 16, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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wonderful
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on February 16, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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wonderful
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on February 16, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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the voice of the piece is amazing
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 16, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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Baby
Once in our true form, the only thing there is, is truth.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on February 16, 2008 at 9:04 PM
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