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Brilliant!
I may not be a decent judge of poetry, but I know sensitive, quality writing when I see it. The best thing I can say about this is, "I wish I'd written it." You expressed deep thought and feeling in a way that transcends personal grief.
posted by
notapoet
on February 8, 2008 at 1:42 AM
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lestate7
posted by
jacentaOld
on February 7, 2008 at 11:08 PM
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I had lost a friend, jay's mom and they thought I have cancer when I had
the tumor........no fun to go through the pain and stress....When I was working at KGH, we had so many Cancer patients.....It was more than I can see ......when I had to give them ROXANOL, I used to pray to god silently and hold their hand......Only I knew how I felt when I took care of every cancer patient....But at that time I was mentally more stronger than now.......Now I am almost getting fragile, I can't take too much of stress any more,
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star4sky5
on February 7, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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Awesome tribute. This needs to be where more people can read the anxiety and the relief all in one. You put yourself out of the picture to see the good of the situation rather than what had been lost. I find this to be quite astute, my friend. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 7, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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extremely beautiful and yes death is the ultimate healing
i felt the same way when my grandpa passed and thanks for the congrats
posted by
quietguy7
on February 7, 2008 at 11:25 AM
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Saying hello to you at this tumultuous time
She's free... nurture yourself...the world of rap music needs your positive and healing words. I can hear your words being sung/spoken.
posted by
wordjewels
on February 7, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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my mom experienced the same...I know how you feel
posted by
Ariala
on February 7, 2008 at 4:36 AM
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That's very uplifting Lestate7 I'm sure she's at peace seeing you at peace.
God bless your mother and you dear one.........
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 7, 2008 at 4:24 AM
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