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Afzal
If my life could be perfect, it would be. Unfortunately, it is not, as you know what I am up against. You know somewhat of my past, and a lot of my future if I am unable to do something.
I never try to hurt you. I only talk with you because I thought that is what you wanted.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on February 4, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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You are one great stranger I would have wanted in my dream Afzal dear...
your poetry seems to escalate way up high dear...throw me one stranger inside that piece....
great job!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 4, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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posted by
Sinome
on February 4, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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posted by
Blue_feathers
on February 4, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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Very thoughtful. Thanks.
posted by
ger_musser
on February 4, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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very interesting
and i agree with ash you have been writing exceptionally well... not that you were ever shabby to begin with
posted by
quietguy7
on February 4, 2008 at 6:09 PM
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Afzal, I am seeing some wonderful poetry from you lately! Is your life going great or is the benefit of shear mental prowess! I love you, Sam
posted by
sam444
on February 4, 2008 at 12:42 PM
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Very conscious work, love the last line.
posted by
pen_dragon
on February 4, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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Very Philosophical.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 4, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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