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posted by
pen_dragon
on February 1, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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Ahhhh......
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on January 31, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 31, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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truly gorgeous poem
posted by
quietguy7
on January 31, 2008 at 11:39 AM
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Hello Afzal, this is a very strong poem. You have written many wonderful ones but this is among your very best! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 31, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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Hi Afzal
Satisfaction - the ultimate satiation - is man's intrinsic desire. All of us are therefore searching for THAT love. No douubt you will get it. There can be no other way.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 31, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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MY LOVE CONTINUES TO SEARCH FOR COMPLETE SATISFACTION
Despite the gruesome outcome, the dance of Salome and her seven veils, must have been a true spectacle, fit for a king. The music, the incense, the candles and lamps, the undulating shadows on the wall -- and this nymphet, firm and in full bloom.
To your point: Lust so often overrides love, for love often carries an inexperienced rider who has lack of either knowledge or the value of denial as a form of reciprocation. Sorry about the long comment, Afzal.joab
posted by
joab1
on January 31, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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Afzal
Very true and beautiful my love.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 31, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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I interpreted this poem as the search for "love" of self. Because it is only when a person loves themself that "complete satisfaction" can be found for it comes from understanding and love of self. Only then can you love another. Nice Job!
Zen
posted by
ZenMom
on January 31, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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posted by
mariaki
on January 31, 2008 at 7:33 AM
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posted by
AlienFemale
on January 31, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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