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Re: dude that was a great read!!!
sneakermzp,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 8:59 PM
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Re:
opheliablue,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 8:59 PM
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Re:
riri,
Thanks !
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 8:58 PM
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dude that was a great read!!!
loved the flow and i loved how you ubruptly ended it.
posted by
sneakermzp
on October 4, 2007 at 8:54 PM
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I love that - the words and the way it's laid out
posted by
opheliablue
on October 4, 2007 at 1:18 PM
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posted by
riri0322
on October 4, 2007 at 10:06 AM
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Re: Beautiful and loving
Erato,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 7:48 AM
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Beautiful and loving
posted by
Katray2
on October 4, 2007 at 7:44 AM
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Re:
AmMused,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Re: Cool! A shape poem.
A-and-B,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Re: Very eloquent, I can almost feel these emotions
mariaki,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Re: Afzal
TAPS,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Re: Afzal
Justi,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:30 AM
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Re: this is beautiful
MiaElla,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 4, 2007 at 6:30 AM
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A lot of emotion! AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on October 4, 2007 at 4:48 AM
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Cool! A shape poem.
posted by
A-and-B
on October 4, 2007 at 4:03 AM
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Very eloquent, I can almost feel these emotions
Afzal, if these are for real it's true that time heals all if not very well done!
posted by
mariaki
on October 4, 2007 at 12:41 AM
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Afzal
Nice form, that makes one drawn to it.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 3, 2007 at 11:49 PM
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Afzal
These are beautiful poems for your loved one.
posted by
Justi
on October 3, 2007 at 10:11 PM
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this is beautiful
posted by
MiaElla
on October 3, 2007 at 9:59 PM
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Re:
Dark Moon,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 3, 2007 at 9:25 PM
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You communicate your pain so vividly Afzal. It is a gift. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on October 3, 2007 at 9:17 PM
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Re: Very intense feelings...
Cunning Linguist,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 3, 2007 at 9:07 PM
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Re: Afzal
Sunny,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on October 3, 2007 at 9:06 PM
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Very intense feelings...
Beautifully expressed!
Melody
posted by
CunningLinguist
on October 3, 2007 at 9:01 PM
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Afzal
I would love to kiss away those tears and your so cute cheeks, and your sweet lips.
I hope to be near you soon, sweetie. (Love, hugs, kisses!)
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on October 3, 2007 at 9:01 PM
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