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posted by
mneme
on October 17, 2007 at 5:16 AM
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Thanks Matie, I need to be a bit more easy going :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on October 3, 2007 at 10:19 PM
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Things change and people move on
so you have to see them go. It's okay if you find new things, take it easy.
posted by
Matie
on October 3, 2007 at 9:48 AM
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You are never too philosophical Bhas :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on October 3, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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Discom -
All those things that we doubt but long for, in my way of thinking, must exist somewhere, otherwise the longing cannot exist out of an empty nothingness. Am I being too philosophical? Excellent poem!!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 3, 2007 at 12:32 AM
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Thanks Tony and Ted :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on October 3, 2007 at 12:04 AM
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Thanks opheliablue :)
Nice to know I don't sound like a whiner
posted by
Discombobulated78
on October 3, 2007 at 12:04 AM
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FineYoungSinger, they sure are
posted by
Discombobulated78
on October 3, 2007 at 12:03 AM
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It'll come right - it may not happen overnight, but it will.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 2, 2007 at 2:23 PM
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Great poem.... I particularly liked the first 3 lines.. brilliant.
And you don't sound like you're whining... it is difficult...
posted by
opheliablue
on October 2, 2007 at 2:01 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 2, 2007 at 11:06 AM
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Transitions are a pain, aren't they?
UGH!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 2, 2007 at 10:11 AM
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