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Re: Afzal
Sunny,
Thanks!
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afzal50
on September 28, 2007 at 8:48 PM
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Re: Afzal, separation and love have combined to make you a fine poet
Bhaskarji,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on September 28, 2007 at 8:47 PM
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Afzal
I always feel pain from being separate from you. You all all I want in this world.


posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on September 28, 2007 at 8:40 PM
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Afzal, separation and love have combined to make you a fine poet
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 28, 2007 at 8:39 PM
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cpklapper,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on September 28, 2007 at 8:23 PM
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Re: the action in this poem...extraordinary
FiveYoungSinger,
Thanks!
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afzal50
on September 28, 2007 at 8:23 PM
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MaggieMae,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on September 28, 2007 at 8:23 PM
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Re: afzal..............
From my own experience, I know that passion must come out and, if it might embarrass our loves for a season, they soon recognize and are charmed by the honesty of our hearts. So, write on!
Carl Peter
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cpklapper
on September 28, 2007 at 1:18 PM
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the action in this poem...extraordinary
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on September 28, 2007 at 11:22 AM
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afzal..............
these poems are wonderful.
Are you sure they're for all of us to read? They seem to be very personal and only meant for one special girl's eyes.

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MaggieMae
on September 28, 2007 at 10:04 AM
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