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Thanks, Tony
We all like to bend the rules a little on occasion.  Particularly when there is no real harm done.  I think you need to go back to calling me "Notty."  The high-falutin' stuff has got me looking over my shoulder to see if I'm about to be arrested for impersonating a writer.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Dave
for the combination Haiku, comment, and advice.  I'm just diving in for a few quick shots.  Hope to have time to catch up with your blogs this evening.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 11:52 AM | link to this | reply

Good to see a bit of rule-breaking, Notus Poeticus!

posted by Antonionioni on August 23, 2007 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

A haiku can rhyme
I don't see it as a crime
It might be sublime.

Not that that one is Bruce. Anyway, must have lunch and seal.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 23, 2007 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sheilah
I was hoping it would be as much fun to read as it was to write.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 5:38 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, mariaki
And that is a very good point that you made in your comment.  Your words got me to thinking a little, too.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

afzal50
Thanks.  I'm glad this one has generated some positive response.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

Hi, Ri
I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It was fun to jot down, though I wasn't sure what kind of response it would get.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, shell,y
I didn't think so either.  Which makes me happy.  I like to go against the grain, bend the rules, just be a little different every now and again.  It helps keep others off balance and life more interesting.

posted by notapoet on August 23, 2007 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply

hehehe... liked it!

posted by Sheilah on August 23, 2007 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

All words strung together mean something to someone
nice work

posted by mariaki on August 23, 2007 at 4:32 AM | link to this | reply

Nice indeed !

posted by afzal50 on August 22, 2007 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

enjoyed this one

posted by riri0322 on August 22, 2007 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

I don't think it's suppose to?

posted by shelly_b on August 22, 2007 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

_teddy_, thanks.
I guess the real question is "deep what?"

posted by notapoet on August 22, 2007 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Looking for snorkel...this is deep!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 22, 2007 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply