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Thanks, Tony
We all like to bend the rules a little on occasion. Particularly when there is no real harm done. I think you need to go back to calling me "Notty." The high-falutin' stuff has got me looking over my shoulder to see if I'm about to be arrested for impersonating a writer.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 11:56 AM
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Thanks, Dave
for the combination Haiku, comment, and advice. I'm just diving in for a few quick shots. Hope to have time to catch up with your blogs this evening.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 11:52 AM
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Good to see a bit of rule-breaking, Notus Poeticus!
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 23, 2007 at 9:31 AM
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A haiku can rhyme
I don't see it as a crime
It might be sublime.
Not that that one is Bruce. Anyway, must have lunch and seal.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 23, 2007 at 6:33 AM
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Thanks, Sheilah
I was hoping it would be as much fun to read as it was to write.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 5:38 AM
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Thanks, mariaki
And that is a very good point that you made in your comment. Your words got me to thinking a little, too.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 5:37 AM
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afzal50
Thanks. I'm glad this one has generated some positive response.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 5:33 AM
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Hi, Ri
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to jot down, though I wasn't sure what kind of response it would get.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 5:29 AM
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Thanks, shell,y
I didn't think so either. Which makes me happy. I like to go against the grain, bend the rules, just be a little different every now and again. It helps keep others off balance and life more interesting.
posted by
notapoet
on August 23, 2007 at 5:27 AM
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hehehe... liked it!
posted by
Sheilah
on August 23, 2007 at 5:23 AM
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All words strung together mean something to someone
nice work
posted by
mariaki
on August 23, 2007 at 4:32 AM
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Nice indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on August 22, 2007 at 10:38 PM
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enjoyed this one
posted by
riri0322
on August 22, 2007 at 10:01 PM
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I don't think it's suppose to?
posted by
shelly_b
on August 22, 2007 at 6:16 PM
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_teddy_, thanks.
I guess the real question is "deep what?"
posted by
notapoet
on August 22, 2007 at 5:22 PM
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Looking for snorkel...this is deep!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 22, 2007 at 5:16 PM
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