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I'm glad you all liked it :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on August 23, 2007 at 3:14 PM
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discom
No, it's nice .. steadfast, constant love is rare.
posted by
mneme
on August 21, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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Discombobulated78 - Nice work. I liked it.
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 21, 2007 at 5:11 AM
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Love like that is something to hold onto.. and share. Very nice!
I thought par was about golf? 
~Peace, OTA 
posted by
Blue_feathers
on August 21, 2007 at 1:32 AM
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Forget par...this is good...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 21, 2007 at 1:25 AM
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Thanks Irish and pelagus :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on August 20, 2007 at 1:52 PM
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a beautiful love
So very well described 
posted by
pelagus
on August 20, 2007 at 9:20 AM
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Discombobulated....well for not being up to par....
It was really an nice poem with lovely romantic thoughts....I enjoyed reading it very much Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Irish3
on August 20, 2007 at 8:47 AM
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