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Thanks, Dave
Every once in a while something pops into my head that works.  The rest of the time I just fake it by playing games with the words.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

And I say tomato, Dave.
Oops.  Wrong vegetable.  Or is the tomato a fruit?  I never can keep them straight.  But thanks for clarifying the Haiku matter.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Twas a good haik by the way, Bruce.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 1, 2007 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Hey Haiku Hooligans,

I had trouble with that for many years. Turns out it's either, depending on which dictionary you look in. If you're edging towards more traditional Japanese, then it should be haiku, but if you've anglicized yourself with no regrets, then it's haikus. You say potato....

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 1, 2007 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Tony
And I'm not sure about the plural of Haiku either.  I could look it up, I suppose, but I'm feeling lazy today.  As for being serious, sometimes I just can't help it.  Glad you liked the group of whatever the plural of Haiku is the other day.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

mariaki
I confess, twas I.  Sometimes even non-poets get lucky.  Most of the time I have to force things.  Glad you liked it.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Notty - sorry I missed those excellent mock haikus - or is the plural
always 'haiku?' I ain't got a clue. Now things are gettin' serious - and that's good - don't feel you always must be light-hearted.

posted by Antonionioni on August 1, 2007 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

You're not a poet you say?
hmmm interesting - so who wrote this?  I'd say it's pretty good!

posted by mariaki on August 1, 2007 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply

_teddy_
Double meanings are interesting.  It's pretty sharp of you to catch this one so quickly.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 1:48 AM | link to this | reply

ain't that the truth...
hey baby got a light?
two dolla no holla...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 1, 2007 at 1:35 AM | link to this | reply

And good morning to you, OTA.
I wish you a wonderful day.  And thank you for reading both of my recent efforts.

posted by notapoet on August 1, 2007 at 1:06 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning Notapoet. ~Peace, OTA

posted by Blue_feathers on August 1, 2007 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply