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Great, Dave!
Commenting on Haiku with a Haiku.  More than I can manage on the spur of the moment, except when I'm somewhat lubricated -- in the spirit with some spirits, you might say.

posted by notapoet on July 22, 2007 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Tony
Of course most of them are Haiku in form only, which is why I often refer to them as pseudo haiku.  But they are fun to do and, with just three lines and seventeen syllables, not too taxing for a faux poet.

posted by notapoet on July 22, 2007 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

Haiking 4 Bruce

The third one I like
the best, capturing nature
and one man's sharp wit.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on July 20, 2007 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

I like you doing haiku!

 

 

posted by Antonionioni on July 20, 2007 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply