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Re: Re: Re: Re: Walking together by the lake--
Would be nice.....where are you????

posted by Irish3 on July 16, 2007 at 12:45 PM | link to this | reply

scriber - Popping in to say hello

posted by FoliageGold on July 13, 2007 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

interesting writing

posted by nenkai04 on July 12, 2007 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Walking together by the lake--thanks Irish3--you know about
fantasies, I'm sure. 

posted by scriber on July 9, 2007 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scriber thanks Troosha. Appreicate your comment.

posted by scriber on July 9, 2007 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scriber...I think you're a funny, sexy and romantic man! Don't deny it! LOL
--RMA--Same to you.  Uh, all but the man part.    Thanks. 

posted by scriber on July 9, 2007 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scriber - '...desire over common sense...' Right, FoliageGold...
thanks for your comment. 

posted by scriber on July 9, 2007 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Walking together by the lake--thanks Irish3
Enjoying the fantasies....ohhhhh my popular piece... sorry no pun intended lol

posted by Irish3 on July 9, 2007 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

Scriber
Your can certainly bring some raw truths to life!

posted by Troosha on July 9, 2007 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Scriber...I think you're a funny, sexy and romantic man! Don't deny it! LOL

posted by RckyMtnActivist on July 9, 2007 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

scriber - '...desire over common sense...' Indeed! Love this one as we
do tend to go back and re-think what was and compare notes.  Well done! 

posted by FoliageGold on July 9, 2007 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: scriber-sensual--thanks lustorlove.

posted by Lanetay on July 8, 2007 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scriber-sensual--thanks lustorlove.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

scriber
wow very sensual

posted by Lanetay on July 8, 2007 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Mark--yes that is a great saying. Like "Ask not wot you can do
fo your country, ask wot the country can do fo you."

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Heck, I didn't know common sense even factored into it ~
'Course, I'm still working on "Suck it, Whitey", so there ya go.

posted by mark2556 on July 8, 2007 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NAJWA--thanks for all that...

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

 my train admires your poem........the stranger

posted by NAJWA on July 8, 2007 at 3:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Awesome work on capturing a moment! --thanks wakthatfatgurl.
hahaha!! Scriber, you're kewl!

posted by justanotherskinnybitch on July 8, 2007 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Awesome work on capturing a moment! --thanks wakthatfatgurl.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Offy--No, I'm not tall, She was five feet nine, and I not more than an
inch taller.  But she was strangely heavy, seemed to weigh more because of her thinness.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Walking together by the lake--thanks Irish3

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent!!!thanks Dark mistress, appreciate your comment.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: isn't that the truth...thanks MiaElla.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome work on capturing a moment!

posted by justanotherskinnybitch on July 8, 2007 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

scriber
Wonderful as usual...are you tall?

posted by Offy on July 8, 2007 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Walking together by the lake
contemplating love making, taking her roughly, the lakes chill causing shiver as lovers move together, a memory fond in the telling......masterful Scriber I'm smiling thanks.

posted by Irish3 on July 8, 2007 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Great work - well done.

posted by _Symphony_ on July 8, 2007 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!!!

posted by dark_mistress on July 8, 2007 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

isn't that the truth...

posted by MiaElla on July 8, 2007 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem indeed ! WEll described !

posted by afzal50 on July 8, 2007 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: thanks for checking in A-B....

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: thanks drohan254--actually she was bigger and taller then me.

posted by scriber on July 8, 2007 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

posted by A-and-B on July 8, 2007 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

beautifully done , i was thinking you are very tall , i enjoyed the reading

posted by drohan254 on July 8, 2007 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply