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Well, I think you already

know what I'm thinking. I'm so sorry. It's hard to "fix" people. Even if they have the same core beliefs, it can be impossible to maintain stability when one partner has the gravity of a black hole.

As long as your safe

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on August 22, 2007 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

very sad poem but you write well,with emotion.

posted by proc on August 9, 2007 at 3:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you, Teddy, for reading when I am so absent!

Lady, I know a little of that rough road...if that groove never comes back, hey...Life is good with people like you in it! Try the Law thing again, woman...there must be some area you can beat the hell out of ...chin up, Red!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 9, 2007 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Teddy, for reading when I am so absent!

I keep trying, but I can't get my Blogit groove back on. Life and it's never-ending changes, you know about these, yes? I'm glad you liked the poem, thanks so much for commenting. xo

posted by Temple on August 9, 2007 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning, you...fantastic poem, my friend!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 8, 2007 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Temple, I know what you mean about "the tortured place".

Nice to see you passing through comments just now. Haven't read you for a while.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on July 17, 2007 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

I'm getting a little worried, but then I also understand how and where much of your best stuff comes from.

posted by Holy_Grail on July 5, 2007 at 3:43 PM | link to this | reply

Great piece - liked it very much.

posted by Antonionioni on July 5, 2007 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

rainy day

It's sad because I think many artists and writers do some of their best work from what I call "the tortured place" ... sad, angry, lost ... I know that is some of my best work. Thanks for such a lovely comment, but the hurt behind the pen, as you said, will pass ... eventually. I'm glad you liked it though. :) Happy will come at some point.

posted by Temple on July 5, 2007 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Okay, this is a note to ALL commenters...

I am trying to get back into the swing of this again, and just writing has been difficult. The fact that I'm responding is nothing short of a miracle. Please don't be offended if I don't stop by and read just yet. I'm working my way back, and I appreciate your support and kind words more than you know.

Thank you!

posted by Temple on July 5, 2007 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

this was my first read of the morning and it was such a sad one. Sometimes we write from such a dark place... It sounds like this was birthed in such origins.. I am sorry for the hurt behind the pen, but this is truly a beautiful piece...

posted by rainydayinmay on July 5, 2007 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply

dark mistress

yes... more than I can say....

posted by Temple on July 5, 2007 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

circuit

Humble thanks to you. I found this picture somewhere and thought it was perfect, glad you like it, too.