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Beautifully written but with a pain embedded as well
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 4, 2007 at 5:51 AM
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Well written, with great honesty!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 3, 2007 at 11:48 AM
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Thanks
My brother and I have never had a succesfull bond. We agree on many things and like many of the same things, its like an on-and-off relationships, there are times when we get along really well and then there are times when I have a hard time thinking of him as one of the people in the world I SHOULD have a close relationship. At times he surprises me, but he never fails to dissapoint. Its not a pain, really. I had written poems for a long time, dodging the subject of my brother, knowing it would come up eventually. And true enough, one day, it all just poured out of me...Thanks you guys
posted by
Kjoil
on July 3, 2007 at 10:42 AM
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I don't quite know how you must be feeling-being torn apart by your
brother's actions-it is similar for me and one of my sisters! It hurts-but---well written!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 3, 2007 at 9:35 AM
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VEry passionately written !
posted by
afzal50
on July 3, 2007 at 9:25 AM
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a serving of intense feelings.
posted by
circuit
on July 3, 2007 at 8:39 AM
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