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Re: Beauty is understated...
Irish,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 11:02 AM
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Re: Stonehenge Revisited
joab1,
When I said harsh I did not mean harsh seriously but was speaking lightly .
You are always welcome to comment as you wish .
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 10:57 AM
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Stonehenge Revisited
I need to be clear; and the following is doggerel. So you see, no harshness, only humor, was involved. joab
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phantasy at 3 o'clock high
It was mid-afternoon on a summer's day
when the dragon landed in Venice Bay.
A handsome creature of iridescent hues
it capsized sailboats -- consumed their crews.
Using feet to paddle and tail to steer,
it propelled itself to Santa Monica Pier,
opened its mouth and with a hearty crunch,
added ten shocked tourists to its lunch.
Out came a hiccup and a fiery sneeze,
that scorched the tops of twenty palm trees,
then it rolled those coral eyes once more,
back toward Venice -- and me, on the shore.
Well, the waters boiled as it took to the air,
where it circled my head and hovered there,
snaked out its tongue as if to point, and with
a butane belch . . . re-ignited my joint.
joab/'67
posted by
joab1
on June 20, 2007 at 10:24 AM
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Re: Re: Do bloggers feel that what they say and talk to one another becomes poem?
I am a writer. A doggerel is a rhyming scheme with a certain metre. Harsh, I was not...humor was my intent; but if you don't want me to observe, I'll bypass your blog. Don't be so sensitive.
joab
posted by
joab1
on June 20, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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Beauty is understated...
and can only blush at your words....lovely I love it write more.
posted by
Irish3
on June 20, 2007 at 9:45 AM
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Re: Lovely poem!
Chilitree,
Thanks !
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 9:13 AM
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Re: Wow, thanks for the idea.
scriber,
Thanks !
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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Lovely poem!
posted by
Chilitree
on June 20, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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Wow, thanks for the idea.
posted by
scriber
on June 20, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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Re: Afzal
sunny,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 9:00 AM
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Afzal
You are the sweetest man. You know how I love every word you express.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 20, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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Re: short and sweet...
MadamShyness,
Thanks!
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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Re: Do bloggers feel that what they say and talk to one another becomes poem?
Joab1,
Don't be so harsh please.
posted by
afzal50
on June 20, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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short and sweet...
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2007 at 8:39 AM
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Do bloggers feel that what they say and talk to one another becomes poem?
Or doggerel.
joab
posted by
joab1
on June 20, 2007 at 8:35 AM
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