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These days your words connect and bleed out like an open sore. We all wish for healing and what your poem spills out is what most of us need to hear. This world is sick and the people in it are coughing, spitting helplessness. Like you wrote, God, huh, what God? Peace to you-good writing.
posted by
damselfly
on June 13, 2007 at 7:35 PM
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Sorry Afzal
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 13, 2007 at 10:20 AM
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peace
posted by
star4sky5
on June 13, 2007 at 12:09 AM
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patmanplus
I read your poem. Such pain. I am sorry. You are a good writer but you are wrong about one thing you can't strike out with God unless you just want to do that. You can find God. God is always ready to be with you but people have always suffered with God. If you are suffering for God it will make you stronger, better, greater and if you aren't suffering for God let go of the pain and write, write and write. You are good. I bet you have a lot to say. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on June 12, 2007 at 11:29 PM
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Fraud or no fraud......
cafzal's right. Great poem and well written...just like all your stuff. And I
do come in here everyday and read your writing. Everyday....if that's not a hint than I don't know what is.
posted by
dark_mistress
on June 12, 2007 at 9:36 PM
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My bad, sorry
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 12, 2007 at 8:12 PM
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It was a peice of shit offered up on a stained platter
whatever the fuck that means
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 12, 2007 at 7:06 PM
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That doesn't count. Did you even read it, fraud.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 12, 2007 at 7:02 PM
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Great poem ! Well written .
posted by
afzal50
on June 12, 2007 at 6:35 PM
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