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this seems to relate to most lives today, i sometimes wonder here we put it
all, another poem i really enjoyed,
posted by
jeansaw
on August 23, 2007 at 9:12 PM
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I find that it helps to write when the mind gets cluttered
which it seems you have done. It is the corresponding and opposing action of Sir Walter Scot's strategy of reading to remove writer's block. As to blanking, I am afraid that in my case it is just a sign of approaching senility or the ravages of repeated, random brainstorms.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on June 18, 2007 at 8:06 PM
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Straightforward
Better to have too much going on up there, than to suffer from what I like to call, "Paris Hilton Syndrome!" 
posted by
Enigmatic68
on June 7, 2007 at 3:51 PM
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Re: Blank blank blank out
I wonder if that blanking out has anything to do with all the clutter that we have in our houses, or is it that some of us simply marry packrats?
Great work here! Damon
posted by
Damond
on June 7, 2007 at 10:59 AM
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Straightforward
I guess it happens to everyone. I don't know anyone with instant recall of everything they want to remember.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 5, 2007 at 8:26 AM
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Straightforward
Sounds like me sometimes...lol.
posted by
avant-garde
on June 5, 2007 at 3:59 AM
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As a student of law, I suggest you fill in the blanks...
posted by
scriber
on June 4, 2007 at 2:35 PM
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straightforward
Yes, it's amazing how cluttered blanking out is. Well done. Hadn't thought about it in these terms.
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 4, 2007 at 2:09 PM
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I loved reading this!!
posted by
trisha4005
on June 4, 2007 at 12:54 PM
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YOUR POEM SAID TO ME YOU ARE THE PERFECT HUMAN VERY HONEST AND OPEN HEART,,,,,,,,
,,,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on June 4, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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Your poetry
I like your poetry.. it speaks from the heart.. and is from the same heart we all share
posted by
Blue_feathers
on June 4, 2007 at 9:10 AM
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So true - I'm sure you're not alone!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 4, 2007 at 7:42 AM
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Well written Straightforward! I believe we all (or most of us)-carry a
great deal of 'clutter'-or-'baggage'-and that is why-'other's lives touch parts of our own.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 4, 2007 at 7:35 AM
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Nice!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 4, 2007 at 7:28 AM
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Hmm...i think i have selective discarding
posted by
dark_mistress
on June 4, 2007 at 3:57 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on June 3, 2007 at 7:19 PM
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wEll Said !!!!!
posted by
afzal50
on June 3, 2007 at 7:02 PM
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