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Re: I won't forget you
BenjaminLM,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 7:54 PM
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I won't forget you
No, I won't forget you.
You've made a big effort to respond to my writings, and I appreciate it greatly.
I was just thinking about cancelling my BlogIt subscription, but now I'm not so sure.
Thanks.
Enjoy.
Sincerely,
Benjamin L.M.
www.myspace.com/benjaminlm_
posted by
BenjaminLM_
on April 25, 2007 at 7:09 PM
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Decshak,
Thanks for analysing the grammatical error which YOu have found out . I shall see if any suitable changes can be brought about in the poem as you say so.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 4:22 AM
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"And as well pass the core of our heart" is not grammatical, if you don't
mind my saying....I think either "passes" without the "as well" would fix it, or did you mean "well past the core of our heart"?
posted by
WindTapper
on April 25, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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Re: well put - posted chapter 31
linter,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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Re: Afzal
Enigmatic,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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Re:
Chilitree,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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Re: Afzal-
LadyCeeMarie,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2007 at 3:40 AM
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well put - posted chapter 31
posted by
linter
on April 25, 2007 at 1:35 AM
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Afzal
Thanks, I really needed to read a beautiful poem like that - my computer crashed earlier this evening, and I lost everything - including the script I was writing! My fault for not having it backed up on disc. Oh, well, as one of my favorite philosopher's (Nietzsche) said - "Whatever doesn't destroy us, makes us stronger!" And I'm sure as hell not going to let this destroy me!
posted by
Enigmatic68
on April 24, 2007 at 11:49 PM
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posted by
Chilitree
on April 24, 2007 at 11:30 PM
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posted by
Chilitree
on April 24, 2007 at 11:30 PM
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Afzal-
I will always remember you. Very sweet and soulful poem.
LadyCee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on April 24, 2007 at 11:05 PM
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Sunny,
I am glad you liked it darling . Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on April 24, 2007 at 10:27 PM
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Afzal
It's very lovely.
Your heart is so beautiful, sweetie.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on April 24, 2007 at 10:26 PM
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