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Write about it whenever you get a chance. It soothes the soul.
Remeber you are special because you see life from a very precious point of view.
Keep writing and healing!
tcobbin
posted by
tamscamandpen
on March 22, 2007 at 11:35 AM
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Very well expressed. I love pieces that say so much in so few words.
Remember we are normal even if we have depression - we just see the world from a very precious point of view.
tcobbin
posted by
tamscamandpen
on March 22, 2007 at 11:33 AM
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NICE POST
posted by
Charnell_Lanay
on March 22, 2007 at 8:01 AM
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Hello... I hope you don't mind me sharing this little poem with you.
Good and bad
GOOD AND EVIL
LAUGHTER AND TEARS
ARE RELATIVES.
PAIN AND JOY ARE NEIGHBOURS.
GOOD AND EVIL WRESTLE
IN THE SAME SPACE...
LOVE AND HATE LIVE
IN THE SAME BODY.
SANITY AND FOLLY
WAGE WAR
IN THE SAME MIND.
posted by
Chilitree
on March 22, 2007 at 2:07 AM
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The inner struggles can at times be very troubling. God Bless
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 21, 2007 at 2:47 PM
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Well written .
posted by
afzal50
on March 21, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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Hey me too
Hey, I liked you rpoem as it voices the inner struggle I often go through also. I am bi-polar and experince the drastic mood swings and know depression very well. I too feel like two people and feel that I just want to be one, the person that is me, whole and healthy and happy. I related very well with what you ahd to say in your poem. Thank you.
posted by
AceGemini
on March 20, 2007 at 5:52 PM
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