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MarieClaire
Ecstasy of an expectant mother well expressed in the structure of a football.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 16, 2007 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

Marie-Claire
So you had a little footballer too:) Something dads miss out on, that experience of a resident wriggler moving about it your tum when you're trying to sleep. Fun and bliss - wouldn't have missed it for the world.

posted by mneme on March 9, 2007 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Tony, I thought you might enjoy the sporting reference,
Yeah only boys kick like that!

posted by marieclaire66 on March 8, 2007 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply

Hi MC - I like the way this is structured, and the echoing of sounds.
I also like the reference to football. It must be a boy!

posted by Antonionioni on March 8, 2007 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha, I could not agree more.
exquisite agony is an oxymoron, but I guess the rewards make it worth the pain.

posted by marieclaire66 on March 8, 2007 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

Marieclaire
Well I wouldn't quite call it "exquisite agony" but agony yes.  The rewards, however,  are infinite.   

posted by Troosha on March 7, 2007 at 11:55 PM | link to this | reply

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wonderful.you thought about a life before sprouting.

rithwik.lancs


posted by rihwik.lancs on March 7, 2007 at 11:49 PM | link to this | reply

Mothers feeling giving birth to a baby is well expressed in this poem .

posted by afzal50 on March 7, 2007 at 11:49 PM | link to this | reply