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this one really tugs at the heartstrings.. so sad when lovers are not with each other.
posted by
mneme
on March 12, 2007 at 2:50 PM
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No other books lately Bhaskar
I think I'll go back to non-fiction for awhile. I don't get as emotionally involved in non-fiction!
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 7, 2007 at 9:32 AM
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All well? Any other book you found?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 6, 2007 at 11:03 PM
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Good day Bhaskar :)
No poetry from me today though.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 6, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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Hi Discom- Good Morning
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 6, 2007 at 5:57 PM
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I definitely can relate to your poem
The here and now come present that we yearn for.
posted by
cpklapper
on March 6, 2007 at 3:38 PM
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Oops forgot to comment on the aggression part
and the men whom I have known who do housework and who are polite also are not aggressive. But granted, they're not a dime a dozen.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 5, 2007 at 8:13 PM
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Straightforward
I've found men who do the housework and who are polite. They do exist. And I've found real love to boot, so I guess I'm three for three.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 5, 2007 at 7:49 PM
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Yes, real love and about real men doing housework and real men being polite
and not aggressive. What say?
posted by
Straightforward
on March 5, 2007 at 7:32 PM
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proc
I'm an American living in New Zealand, and I like New Zealand but I'll be going back to America sometime soon. Unless some sweeping change comes along, I'll be going back. My heart (and the one whom I love most) lives there.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 5, 2007 at 7:31 PM
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Thanks all
Bhas, I have read your post and I enjoyed it though I'm exhausted today, so my brain's not up for a detailed comment right now. I'm sorry. I'll probably think of some thoughts a bit later, and will e-mail or comment later.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 5, 2007 at 1:09 PM
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Nice Poem!
We often look for love in the wrong places and love aways finds us when we least exspect it.
posted by
jasoncaron
on March 5, 2007 at 11:05 AM
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Dreams distanced by the sharp blade of Time...
excellent piece!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 5, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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proc, Discom-
Springing from "Time Traveller's Wife", the poem assumes deep connotations. I have attemted a post today, based on you, Deepananda, and Troosha. Kindly read if you so feel like.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 5, 2007 at 8:54 AM
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Someone posted a comment on my site saying they d met another new zealander
so I thought Id pop in to meet you.Im also an adopted new zealander having escaped from the violence in South Africa 10 years ago.I miss my family but Im not lonely as Ive got 4 kids,their friends,my own friends,a grandson and various activities in the church and as a volunteer and school reliever.I like your poem.It expresses a deep longing.....
posted by
proc
on March 5, 2007 at 2:56 AM
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It's really a very nice poem .
posted by
afzal50
on March 5, 2007 at 1:21 AM
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