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interesting story.

posted by richinstore on February 26, 2007 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you :)
The story is being written from the starting point of someone finding the will to live again, after having lost it, of course. So I think it's a little hard to start from the pov a suicidal character. Might take a couple tries :)

posted by inkdancing on February 26, 2007 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

Doesn't hook right away.
Needs to be cleaned up quite a bit. There are lots of grammatical errors. But it could be interesting.

posted by Kripayne on February 25, 2007 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply