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                interesting story.
                
                    posted by
                    richinstore
                     on February 26, 2007 at 7:19 AM
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                    Thank you :)
                
                The story is being written from the starting point of someone finding the will to live again, after having lost it, of course. So I think it's a little hard to start from the pov a suicidal character. Might take a couple tries :)
                
                    posted by
                    inkdancing
                     on February 26, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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                    Doesn't hook right away.
                
                Needs to be cleaned up quite a bit. There are lots of grammatical errors. But it could be interesting.
                
                    posted by
                    Kripayne
                     on February 25, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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