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Tonyzonit

I'm slow catching up. This sonnet was worthy of our past poets - lovely thoughts about both mother nature and our natural mothers.  Progress is painful, but inevitable.. I've been looking at the music of the spheres, just out of interest; that came from Ariala's blog about Schumann Resonance. I thought it would have some 'resonance' with medieval and renaissance theories of cosmology, and guess what..it does (from Pythagoras - who didn't only do maths).  I love my work.

(ariala's post if you are curious) http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Ariala3669/444309 

posted by mneme on February 27, 2007 at 2:17 AM | link to this | reply

I like this one, a lot.

posted by shypettite on February 26, 2007 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks everyone!

posted by Antonionioni on February 26, 2007 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

Nice Tony.

posted by Scramble on February 26, 2007 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

Tony
What a wonderful  description of "leaving the nest" yet (at least for me) a mother's voice somehow echos in the distance - never lost. 

posted by Troosha on February 26, 2007 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Tony - Great way of reminding us how nature can be rough on the mother
once those bonds have weakened.. and we become "independent". Great analogy and insight.

posted by shadow-pen on February 26, 2007 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

Hi - thanks for your comments, everyone!
Interesting to see your reactions to this one! It was mainly inspired by thinking about my mother, who wasn't feeling very well last week. Oh well, here we are, another Monday!

posted by Antonionioni on February 26, 2007 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
Birthing is a transformation. We rarely stop by to appreciate this continuous creative process in which play a major part. The major part being, we are the only audience and the rest of the universe are the actors. What a show!!!

posted by DEEPANANDA on February 25, 2007 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Tonyzonit
Lovely sonnet my friend, and I just filled my feeders today. It's still quite cold, but they are flitting about.

posted by WileyJohn on February 25, 2007 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent Sonnet Tony, versatile you are Sir, thanks for posting  

posted by lionladroar on February 25, 2007 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Superb, Tony. This one is a sonnet sublime to Nature, the mother.
She births us, nourishes and nurtures us, and then our flights...when it takes us far from the earth, She bids us from afar, "be your best", we are too absorbed elsewhere, to hear or thank her, for her benovelent wish to the early bird catching the worm

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 25, 2007 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Blue_feathers on February 25, 2007 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

Tony...
I'm a visualizer...this was excellent! 

posted by ---Masky--- on February 25, 2007 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks - well yes, who indeed?

posted by Antonionioni on February 25, 2007 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

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who snatched away our worship for mother nature?post for thought.

rithwik.lancs


posted by rihwik.lancs on February 25, 2007 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply