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Decshak,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on February 6, 2007 at 9:08 AM
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You can almost feel the train swaying in this one. Good poem.
posted by
WindTapper
on February 6, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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Erkin-am,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on February 5, 2007 at 4:50 AM
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posted by
Rosetree
on February 5, 2007 at 4:49 AM
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mobedder,
Thanks .
posted by
afzal50
on February 5, 2007 at 1:18 AM
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This is
so absolutely sweet and loving.
posted by
mobedder
on February 5, 2007 at 1:11 AM
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Sunny,.
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on February 4, 2007 at 10:02 AM
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Afzal
Very nice, love. I also wish I was able to have been there with you.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on February 4, 2007 at 10:00 AM
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stbond,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on February 4, 2007 at 9:30 AM
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Very evokative. . .
of the drowsy, displaced, half-enjoyable, half-melancholy feeling of going somewhere on a train.
posted by
stbond
on February 4, 2007 at 9:28 AM
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Ariala ,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on February 4, 2007 at 9:13 AM
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Welcome back...!
posted by
Ariala
on February 4, 2007 at 9:11 AM
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