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Corbin Dallas ,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 6:53 AM
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Thanks for stopping by my place....
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on January 25, 2007 at 6:49 AM
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shadow-pen,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 6:38 AM
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Afzal - you come acroos so sincere and committed..
I'm sure you can conquer the Tempest or any other obstacles that may trouble you..
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 25, 2007 at 6:30 AM
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Sunny,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 6:10 AM
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Afzal
Sweet Love, you are so sweet and wonderful. You do not have to feel so upset over these issues of mine. I love you with all my heart.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 25, 2007 at 6:07 AM
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richinstore,
Thanks .
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 6:04 AM
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Nice poem, afzal.
posted by
richinstore
on January 25, 2007 at 6:03 AM
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Chilitree,
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 5:42 AM
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ariel70,
Thanks for stopping by with your valuable advise .
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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A poem full of love ...well done.
posted by
Chilitree
on January 25, 2007 at 5:18 AM
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Afzal
While I like and admire the sentiments expressed in this, and most of your other work, I can't say that I like all those ~~~s and ***s
I'm not being critical, and heavan forfend that I should ever tell anyone what or how to write, but I really do feel that they detract from the impact of the emotions expressed.
Taken in the spirit in which it is offered???
posted by
ariel70
on January 25, 2007 at 5:03 AM
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