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Sunny,
I am happy you liked it . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on January 23, 2007 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

Afzal's writings inspired this one...

Loving husband

And wife face

Strife of life

Upon the wings

Of their love

Being lovers

Best friends

Faithful

Truthful

Mindful

Respectful

Thankful

And

Blessed.

posted by Chilitree on January 23, 2007 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

Afzal
This is very lovely, sweetie.   

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on January 23, 2007 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

richinstore,
Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on January 23, 2007 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS,
Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on January 23, 2007 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poem, afzal.

posted by richinstore on January 23, 2007 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

Afzal
Your poetry is quite distinctive.  You have quite a different style than anyone else.

posted by TAPS. on January 23, 2007 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply