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tennyA,
Aap kiya Hinudustani ho ? Shukriya .

posted by afzal50 on January 14, 2007 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

chupke chupke
kabhie kabhie chup rahne main akalmandi hain aur wahi mohabbat ki hifazat bhi. pyaar chupaye nahi chupta. duniya ki bad nazar se bachne je liye nazare jhukana padta hain.

posted by tenny_A on January 14, 2007 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny,.
It is the silence of being helpless in the situation of mine living far away from my beloved .Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on January 14, 2007 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Afzal
This is cute and very interesting.  What is this silence about, my love?

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on January 14, 2007 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

stbond,
Thanks for appreciating my efforts.

posted by afzal50 on January 14, 2007 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

What lovely thoughts. . .
and Urdu sounds like a beautiful language. I love reading poetry in other languages just for the sound.

posted by stbond on January 14, 2007 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply