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Thanks Bhaskar and Mike - hope your floors are clean too.

posted by Antonionioni on December 28, 2006 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

Sonnet of truth, who said theres wealth in muck ?
I guess they meant if its written of so well, there is. Entertaing as always Tony 

posted by lionladroar on December 28, 2006 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
Excellent!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 28, 2006 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, I'll have to take my daughter to see Flushed Away.
She refuses to wash her hands.

posted by Antonionioni on December 28, 2006 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

I'm impressed with anyone who. . .
throws themselves into cleaning, anytime. I enjoy neat surroundings, just not creating them. At least all of this detritus provided fodder for another sonnet.

posted by stbond on December 27, 2006 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

you are so cool Tony, you did well

posted by star4sky5 on December 27, 2006 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

broom, brooom would you like me to take you "to the cleaners"?
um bad pun i know, still i could not resist. Come and "see" me sometime, you know what i mean.

posted by marieclaire66 on December 27, 2006 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Tonyzonit
whether I use the broom or the vacuum cleaner often depends on whether the boy is sleeping in or not, soppy mum that I am... as to the dirt.. wonder if it ends up on the sea-bed and that's what your Dover Sole (or other bottom-feeder) eats? The ultimate in recycling...  
I liked your Christmas sonnets too - are they really still showing The Great Escape every year LOL - wouldn't be the same without it!   

posted by mneme on December 27, 2006 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

I can definitely give one Jerry Brown all the credit for a movie like "Flushed Away" existing in my world.

posted by Jenasis on December 27, 2006 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

SYMPHONY

do you feel like coming and cleaning mine for me?

Just thought I would ask,

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 27, 2006 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

flushed away

Have you seen the animation flushed away?

As first I thought Oh Oh! Toilet humour - but - no it was quite funny and did have a story line.

I reccommend you go and see.

I like the broom rather than the vacuam cleaner too!

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 27, 2006 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

MC - I think I've given the wrong impression - I don't enjoy it. Yuk!
However, I will make an exception and come down to your place - it's only a short distance after all!

posted by Antonionioni on December 27, 2006 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

Symph, in about a month when enough crap has built up again!
I bet you've got one of those Dysons.

posted by Antonionioni on December 27, 2006 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal, thanks!

posted by Antonionioni on December 27, 2006 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Tony, come clean my house now, but it is nothing to write about !
yep, it is quite a feat, turning dirt into a sonnet as someone said earlier. We should call Mr Clean. Now, you can " show" me the evidence, well soon anyway, i hope.

posted by marieclaire66 on December 27, 2006 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

I love a challenge...

allow me to come and clean your house for you.......as this mess is going to be on my mind all night long.

I can see you have missed many places....let me do it so I can do it properly....hahaha

posted by _Symphony_ on December 27, 2006 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting poem.

posted by afzal50 on December 27, 2006 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

That's the kind of thing that inspires me, I'm afraid!!

posted by Antonionioni on December 27, 2006 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

Tony if you can make poetry out of floor muck.
You are a true poet.

posted by Budmannomore on December 27, 2006 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply