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am I not understanding this, what is this saying?

posted by Lanetay on November 3, 2006 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
You are most welcome. I will be back later, after my mother has her turn on the computer.  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on November 3, 2006 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny,
I am grateful.Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
I have the heart of someone special and have very good reason to be sweet and kind.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on November 3, 2006 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny,
You are very sweet and kind .Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
I understand now, sweetie. I wish there didn't have to be such pain. It will subside, eventually.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on November 3, 2006 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward,
Thanks for stopping by !

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny,
It expresses the pain and pangs of love with other grievances. Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

star4you,
Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

Bhaskar,
I have to translate it for my English readers . I know its easily understood by you . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on November 3, 2006 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

I like this simple poem Afzal.

posted by Straightforward on November 3, 2006 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
This was very nice, although, I'm not sure I understood the message in this one.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on November 3, 2006 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful afzal

posted by star4sky5 on November 3, 2006 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
Good. You are giving a translation too. But I can under these mostly without the translation. Keep it up.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 3, 2006 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply