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Passion,
Love is all about forgiving and moving ahead . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 25, 2006 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

I think Sunny forgave you too easily...
What's up with that?

posted by Passionflower on October 25, 2006 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Mandalee,
Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 25, 2006 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful!

posted by Amanda__ on October 25, 2006 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

babe rocks , I appreciate your view . Thanks .

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

If you mean a fiction writer, he/she writes fiction.  The stories aren't literally true.  But nobody lives in a vacuum and therefore stories have to come from somewhere.  The fact that a reader can see parallel between the story and the writer's life should be ignored and the work should stand on its own.

posted by babe_rocks on October 24, 2006 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

babe rocks , What is your opinion on pesonal life of a writer ?
Should it be equated with his work or should it be seen in isolation?

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

The poem is good.  The comments are funny.

posted by babe_rocks on October 24, 2006 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

babe rocks , What is funny the poem or the comments .

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Excuse me for laughing but this is kind of funny.

posted by babe_rocks on October 24, 2006 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

OFFBEATS , thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny , I shall talk to you after three hours from now . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

OFFBEATS
between the both of them they have blogit covered

posted by Lanetay on October 24, 2006 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

No
Now he is talking to the lovely lotus petal...o brother...But it is a nice poem..

posted by Offy on October 24, 2006 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

OFFBEATS
oh darn I thought it was me

posted by Lanetay on October 24, 2006 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

lilane
He wrote this for Passionflower..

posted by Offy on October 24, 2006 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

too many on the list to count

posted by Lanetay on October 24, 2006 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
If you are around and want to talk, let me know.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Plz apply your mind and you will get the answer .

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

which lady are you writing this to?

posted by Lanetay on October 24, 2006 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
You have

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

Did you just read my thoughts? Or did I read yours? Hahaha
Quit running through my mind!   

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Did you get my email?

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, I have sent the reply . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
It's alright.  I'll forgive you this time.  You will make it up to me.  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, I am sorry .

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
So you break my heart in order to get me to come to blogit?  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, That's the best way to have you here . Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal

I leave blogit for a few hours and you're writing poetry for other women again?

You have

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on October 24, 2006 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

Passion ,
I am grateful . I shall always be soliciting your opinion and advise .Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

Well sure it does....
Those lines about death and drowning are very beautiful..

posted by Passionflower on October 24, 2006 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Passion, I have Sunny who is very sweet and kind to me . Thanks.
Does my poetry carry any literary value .Honest remark please ?

posted by afzal50 on October 24, 2006 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

I'm touched by this, but don't you have a few girlfriends around here?
Women get really mean when they're pissed and jealous....

posted by Passionflower on October 24, 2006 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply