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smartdog 670, Kat02, star4you,
Thanks for the nice words and encouragement. Be careful, though. You may get the non-poet to thinking he is a poet.
posted by
notapoet
on October 25, 2006 at 8:45 PM
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Thanks, katray
I've tried reading some haiku and most of what I've read agrees with what you say. I have no idea what I'm doing here, but I'm glad you liked my effort.
posted by
notapoet
on October 25, 2006 at 8:39 PM
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Tonyzonit
Thanks. I feel like I'm walking in the dark here. Just thought I'd give it a try. Thanks for commenting about my previous post, too. I was beginning to think it had totally escaped attention.
posted by
notapoet
on October 25, 2006 at 8:34 PM
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hey.....
posted by
star4sky5
on October 24, 2006 at 2:43 PM
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Notapoet
well done
posted by
Kat02
on October 23, 2006 at 9:00 PM
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N-Poet
Nicely done.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on October 23, 2006 at 8:59 PM
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Looks and sounds right to me also Notapoet
I read somewhere that original haiku (crafted by Japanese poets I think) was focused solely on nature, but I have written a few (and read many) that aren't. I guess following the 5-7-5 form is enough to qualify...:) Poignant and clear expression of emotion. Kudos!
posted by
Katray2
on October 23, 2006 at 1:35 PM
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Sorry, I've no idea.
Probably. It looks good to me, tho, Notapoet. Interesting to find out about The Animals and Eric Burdon, too.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 23, 2006 at 1:25 PM
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